Jennifer Lynn Barnes ([info]jenlyn_b) wrote,
@ 2009-11-05 12:46:00
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What's In a Name?
I said I was going to do a writing blog this week, but it looks like I'll probably be doing *multiple* writing blogs, since I am apparently incapable of answering questions in short-form. Today's question comes from [info]abbydarling, who asked:

How do you come up with names for supporting characters that only appear briefly in your story? Or how about character names in general? Do they just come to you? Do you ever change them once you're in the middle of your story?

I tend to be very particular about naming characters, because I think there’s a certain power in naming something. It’s rare that I would be in a situation where I was coming up with a name for an otherwise fully fleshed out character; it’s actually the reverse- finding the right name helps me figure out who a character is. In my process, choosing a name usually happens after I have the general gist of who I want the character to be (a sarcastic tomboy, a girly girl with bite, the logical child in a family of over-the-top siblings, etc), but before I really know the character as a person beyond the general niche that they might fill. As a result, I fully believe that the name I pick for a character ends up influencing who that character becomes. If Bailey from Tattoo and Fate had been a “Kaitlin” or a “Sophie,” she would have probably ended up being a very different person, and as a result, Tattoo and Fate would have ended up being very different books.

As a result, I never really start writing a book until I have the perfect name for the main character, because until I name them, I have no idea who they really are. In terms of finding names, I’m a pretty hardcore name collector. When I meet people, I often end up asking if they have siblings and what all of their names are (it's a better icebreaker than you might think). If I see a cool name somewhere, I write it in document I have entitled “good names.” Every month, my mother sends me her church bulletin, so I can see the names of all the babies that have been baptized in our (rather sizable) church at home. Some names are just waiting for the right character: for example, my dental hygienist has a step-daughter named Kyler. I think it’s an incredibly cool name. Someday, there will be a Kyler in one of my books- as soon as I find a character who fits it.

When I’m stuck, I use baby name sites online. Nymber is one of my very favorite sites- it allows you to type in a bunch of example names that you like, and it generates similar names that you might also consider. This is incredibly helpful for naming characters if I have a name that’s just almost right, but not quite there yet. Or (as is becoming more common) if the only name I can think of for a character is too close to something I’ve already used. I have a real problem with wanting to name at least one character in every book “James” (see also: Lissy and Lexie’s last name in Golden; the love interest’s name in Fate). I’ve also had to prevent myself from re-using Dylan, Cade, Jonah, and Jack, and after writing a Lilah and a Delia, I vetoed the use of Delilah for a character who the name otherwise would have fit really well. With the Nymbler site, I can go and type in all of the names I can’t use, and it will give me similar names that I can (the wannabe Delilah became an Ariana, which was the one of the first suggestions it gave me when I typed in the alternate names).

In general, I’m slightly less picky about names for supporting characters. I can’t imagine changing my main character’s name in a rewrite, but I’ve changed a variety of supporting characters’ names at different points in the process, for a variety of reasons.

+ Zo in the Tattoo books was originally Bo, but I decided to change the first letter of her name so that it didn’t start with the same letter as narrator Bailey’s. There were a couple of scenes where they were being referred to as “Bay” and “Bo,” and that was a little cutesy for me.

+ Brock in Golden and Platinum was originally named Cale (short for Caleb), but his name got changed when I figured out that Lilah’s other love interest was a ghost who I just HAD to name Cade.

+ Bubbles in The Squad series was “Baby” for approximately three chapters until I decided that Bubbles fit a million times better (and didn’t have the Dirty Dancing implications).

+ Zee in The Squad series was originally a Zoe, but I decided that (a) having a Zoe and a Chloe in one book was a No Go, and (b) since I’d already written a Zoe who went by Zo, I couldn’t reuse the name.

+ Fuchsia in the Golden series was originally a character I just could not think of a good name for- so I gave her a placeholder name (which was also the color of her aura), thinking that I’d go back and give her a better name later. And then I kind of forgot to go back, and my editor and agent both loved that her name was Fuchsia, so I ultimately decided to leave it.

Beyond the whole “I’ll change minor character names for pragmatic reasons, but in general think that the act of naming influences who the character becomes” thing, I have two other noticeable quirks when it comes to naming characters: the first is that I’m a total sucker for nicknames. The main character of Golden goes pretty strictly by Lissy, but it’s short for Felicity. Her sister is Lexie (Alexis). Zo in Tattoo is really Zoe-Claire, and the protagonist of Raised By Wolves (due out next summer) is a Bronwyn who goes by Bryn.

My other quirk is that my characters’ middle names almost always show up in the text somewhere- usually in the first couple of chapters. Lissy is Felicity Shannon. Bailey is Bailey Marie. Toby is Toby Guinevere. And Bryn’s full name is a mouthful- she’s Bronwyn Alessia, her original last name was St. Vincent, and once she was adopted into the pack, she also took on the last name Clare (and the book in fact opens with the words “Bronwyn Alessia St. Vincent Clare!”).

So, there you go, [info]abbydarling. I think that's pretty much everything to know about my process for naming characters! Writers, feel free to sound off in the comments and weigh in with your own tips and quirks. Readers, I'd love to hear what your favorite names-you've-read-in-a-book are. And if you have a question about writing, ask away and I'll try to do more writing blogs soon.



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[info]swan_tower
2009-11-05 07:41 pm UTC (link)
As a result, I never really start writing a book until I have the perfect name for the main character, because until I name them, I have no idea who they really are.

Why does Deven in Midnight Never Come go by his last name all book? Because I never found the right first name for him, despite my best efforts. But I had a deadline, so I had to start writing.

I'm excessively prone to word-based names: the Hunters in the doppelganger books, some of the faeries in the Onyx Court series, and a crap-ton of characters in other books not yet written or published. It's gotten so I ration them out; I can't do it for this story because I need much more strongly to do it for that story.

The only time I can think of where I've been able to change the name of a relatively major character mid-stream was when it became, quite by accident, a highly distracting joke. I named a professor in an unpublished novel Shields, but as I wrote the book it transpired that she taught a lot of magic shielding courses . . . yeah, no. So she's Grayson now, and latched onto that name hard enough I generally forget she was ever anyone else. (Woman's a chameleon, really. She also changed from white to black somewhere along the road, and again, I wonder how I ever thought of her as anything else.)

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[info]jenlyn_b
2009-11-06 12:22 am UTC (link)
On the whole "I wonder how I ever thought of her as anything else" point- it took me FOREVER to make the list of characters whose names had changed, because almost down to the one, I'd forgotten that their name was originally something else.

Also, I share your weakness for word-based names (and Hunter is a particularly good one).

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(Anonymous)
2009-11-06 12:15 am UTC (link)
I've always loved the name Ayla from Jean Auel's Earth's Children series. And Diana Gabaldon's Outlander made me love the name James/Jamie.
-Mel

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[info]jenlyn_b
2009-11-06 12:21 am UTC (link)
Ayla is one of my favorites, too!

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(Anonymous)
2009-11-06 12:37 am UTC (link)
some names i've read and become obsessed with to the point that i would possible use them for my own kids: Schuyler and Bliss in Blue Bloods by Melissa de la Cruz; Reason in Magic or Madness by Justine Larbalestier; Astrid in Rampant by Diana Peterfreund; Ever, Haven and Evangeline in Evermore by Alyson Noel; Echo in Saving Zoe (also by Alyson Noel); Tamsin in Once A Witch by Carolyn MacCullough; Miri in Bras And Broomsticks by Sarah Mlynowski; and Nash in My Soul To Take by Rachel Vincent

and yes, i know i read too much

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[info]jenlyn_b
2009-11-06 12:42 am UTC (link)
Ever, Echo, and Reason are three of my favorites, too- I'm a sucker for word-names!

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(Anonymous)
2009-11-06 01:21 am UTC (link)
I love the names you pick!
It's so weird because I always told myself, if I had two daughters, their names would be
1. Scarlett Judy (Thats still a 50/50 for me. I don't particularly love the name Jude but it fits Scarlett so perfectly!)
2. Felicity Brown. I have always loved that name, especially those two together. And I don't know, the names sort of have the same ring to it. (The same ring as your characters)

Wow and Fuchsia is now on my list as well. If you don't mind of course... That is one heck of a cool name.
Its ridiculous because out of all names in the universe, I was named Hannah. It's the most boring name ever. I wish I was named something much cooler. That is why I am putting great thought into making my future daughter's names cool so they don't ever have to suffer through the torture of boring names as I do. Ahaha, that was a long..!

You know whats also pretty?
The name Dimitri for a girl. I'm seeing Dimitri as a real girly girl but with an attitude. I love seeing "guy" names on really girly people. That way, you have a little bit of both.
Also the name Astrid. I love that name.
:o)

-hannah s.

p.s. Wow, I've been writing so much on your blog! I hardly ever post on this blog although I check it every day :o)
p.p.s. Posted this on the wrong post! Whoops!

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[info]jenlyn_b
2009-11-06 01:32 am UTC (link)
I think a lot about potential kids' names, too- in part because "Jennifer" was the single most popular girls' name the year I was born and several years before and after. I've always wished I had a name that wasn't quite so common-so my kids will probably get stuck with incredibly weird names.

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[info]abbydarling
2009-11-06 03:30 am UTC (link)
Dude, that's an awesome post. It's so interesting to hear about your process! Very cool. Thanks for answering my question! :)

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Names
(Anonymous)
2009-11-06 09:18 am UTC (link)
I like staying all the way till the end of a movie to watch the credits to see the names.

This is a little bit morbid, but another good place to find interesting names is wikipedia recent deaths.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Deaths_in_2009

You get to see a lot of cool names from a lot of different nationalities.

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(Anonymous)
2009-11-08 09:25 pm UTC (link)
I really love to meet new people and learn their names! One of my favorite names is Scarlett-from Suite Scarlett! It's also one of my favorite colors along with green and yellow!

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(Anonymous)
2009-11-08 09:42 pm UTC (link)
Hi Jen!
I really love the names you chose for all of your caracters- especially Bubbles =p! Also, do you have any great authors or books you want to reccommend? I looked on your website and bought some books by the authors you suggested. Now I'm a HUGE Gallagher Girls fan and I liked all of the other books as well! Thanks if you can think of any great reads!
-Jackie

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Next book?
(Anonymous)
2009-11-11 11:02 pm UTC (link)
Will you be making more books in the Perfect Cover series and The Golden series? I really want to know if Cade ever comes back and he can get with Lilah - sorry I am a hopeless romantic! Hope you are making some more.

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(Anonymous)
2009-11-12 11:01 pm UTC (link)
Haha, I have a friend whos name is Zahraa(pronounced 'Zara'). We all agree that it's the coolest name ever-especially the spelling.

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